Yes, I know that’s a different war.
The progress on the script continues. I’ve now gone through with a new edit, using my red pen (get the title now?) to make edits and to mark where the script needs to be either rewritten or relocated.
It’s still a work in progres. But we’re closer to the mark, and the proofreading marks.
The goal is to have this next round of edits completed by mid-October with a final, presentable draft coming sometime in November.